carpish's game Reviews on Newgrounds

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Don't know what to say apart from...

"Nice!" This game is nice! It has nice! graphics and nice! sound effects. The gameplay was ok but not totally original.

Nice!

ultramanbastard responds:

thanks

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Tutorial appreciation

It's good that you've made a tutorial, just a few suggestions to improve:

Change the background. The green colour is not pleasant to look at for any length of time. Even just a plain white background is an improvement over green.
The ability to change songs is good, but being able to turn it off would be even better.
The buttons are ok, but could be made a bit nicer.

Gimmick responds:

Thanx for the review. But personally, I think that green over white is better. I might bring some more additions, based on what you said.